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Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread

A 9:16 storyboard, 88 seconds of edit time. Scene lengths are cuts, not the minutes the pot actually needs. Music mood: Warm kitchen, oven tick, no lyrics.

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  1. Scene 1 · hook · 4s

    Hook

    Shot. Open tight on the finished Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread, then pull back just enough to see the plate. Ivory linen, warm window light, no faces, no logos, no text burned into the picture.

    Voiceover. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread keeps the cocoa in the dough, not only on top, and it is baked by weight so the batch repeats. Here is the whole thing, one move at a time.

    On screen. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread

  2. Scene 2 · title · 4s

    Open on the finished dish

    Shot. Slow push-in on the finished Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread, ivory linen, a gold spoon just out of focus. No faces. No logos.

    Voiceover. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread keeps the cocoa in the dough, not only on top, and it is baked by weight so the batch repeats.

    On screen. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread

  3. Scene 3 · ingredients · 6s

    Mise en place

    Shot. Overhead flat lay. Hands set down small bowls in a quiet rhythm. Labels stay out of frame.

    Voiceover. Set out rye flour, water, olive oil, baking powder, kosher salt. Measure before the pan is hot.

    On screen. Mise en place

  4. Scene 4 · equipment · 5s

    Equipment

    Shot. A slow pan across the tools on the counter, then back to the bowl. No brand logos.

    Voiceover. You need Oven or heavy skillet, Scale, Rolling pin, Tongs.

    On screen. Oven or heavy skillet · Scale · Rolling pin

  5. Scene 5 · step · 6s

    Step 1

    Shot. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread: step 1. Natural window light, ivory linen, no text, no logo.

    Voiceover. Heat a heavy skillet or a steel over medium-high, or the oven to 475°F / 246°C. Weigh the dough for Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread keeps the cocoa in the dough, not only on top, and it is baked by weight so the batch repeats.

    On screen. Heat a heavy skillet or a steel over…

  6. Scene 6 · step · 6s

    Step 2

    Shot. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread: step 2. Natural window light, ivory linen, no text, no logo.

    Voiceover. Stir flour, salt, baking powder, oil, water, and the cocoa into a soft dough. Rest it, covered, for 15 minutes.

    On screen. Stir flour, salt, baking powder, oil, water,…

  7. Scene 7 · step · 6s

    Step 3

    Shot. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread: step 3. Natural window light, ivory linen, no text, no logo.

    Voiceover. Divide the dough and roll each piece thin, about 3 millimeters. Thick pieces stay raw in the middle.

    On screen. Divide the dough and roll each piece thin,…

  8. Scene 8 · step · 6s

    Step 4

    Shot. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread: step 4. Natural window light, ivory linen, no text, no logo.

    Voiceover. Cook Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread until melbourne cocoa griddle flatbread has brown spots and a dry-looking surface that flexes without tearing. About 11 minutes total, turning once. A few dark spots are the goal.

    On screen. Cook Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread until…

  9. Scene 9 · step · 7s

    Step 5

    Shot. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread: step 5. Natural window light, ivory linen, no text, no logo. Show the action, then a jump cut through the wait. Do not film the full Bake 11 min in real time.

    Voiceover. Stack the breads in a towel so they stay flexible. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread turns brittle if it cools in a draft.

    On screen. Stack the breads in a towel so they… · Bake 11 min

  10. Scene 10 · step · 6s

    Step 6

    Shot. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread: step 6. Natural window light, ivory linen, no text, no logo.

    Voiceover. Serve warm. If you are baking a batch, keep finished breads covered while the rest cook.

    On screen. Serve warm. If you are baking a batch, keep…

  11. Scene 11 · doneness · 6s

    How you know it is done

    Shot. Close on the center of the food. A skewer, tap, or spoon shows the cue. Hold long enough to see it.

    Voiceover. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread has brown spots and a dry-looking surface that flexes without tearing.

    On screen. Doneness

  12. Scene 12 · mistakes · 7s

    If it goes wrong

    Shot. Split screen is unnecessary. Show the finished, correct texture, then a hand points at the cue.

    Voiceover. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread browns before the center is done. Tent the top with parchment and keep baking until the doneness cue is true in the center. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread comes out dense, sunk, or dry. Mix only until the flour disappears, weigh the fat and liquid, and take it out at the cue rather than by the clock alone.

    On screen. Common fixes

  13. Scene 13 · storage · 5s

    Cooling and storage

    Shot. The dish cools on a rack, then a container is closed. No refrigerator brand in frame.

    Voiceover. Cool Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread on a rack before you bag it, or the crust steams soft. It keeps 2 days at room temperature. Slice and freeze for a month, then toast from frozen.

    On screen. Storage

  14. Scene 14 · nutrition · 5s

    Nutrition lower third

    Shot. Hold on a single serving. A quiet lower third fades in. No medical claims on screen.

    Voiceover. One serving is about 163 calories, with 6.7 grams of protein. Pai marks it Moderate.

    On screen. 163 kcal · 6.7 g protein · Moderate

  15. Scene 15 · plate · 5s

    Plate and close

    Shot. Spoon or tongs place the last garnish. Pull back to the full plate. End on steam or a still surface.

    Voiceover. Serve 8 breads. Eat while it is at its best.

    On screen. Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread

  16. Scene 16 · cta · 4s

    Close

    Shot. Hold the finished plate. A quiet end card can fade in after the picture. Do not cover the food with a logo.

    Voiceover. Cook Melbourne Cocoa Griddle Flatbread from the Pai recipe. The amounts, the heat, and the moment to stop are written under each step.

    On screen. Cook it from the recipe

Machine-readable script for a later video tool. Scene durations are edit lengths, not cooking times. Long simmers and bakes are jump cuts. Order: hook, title, mise, equipment, one scene per numbered step (shot, on-screen text, voiceover, duration), doneness, fixes, storage, nutrition, plate, and the closing CTA. Keep the shot list and on-screen facts tied to this recipe.